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September the first, 2005

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September the first, two-thousand-and-five
That day when we met,
Do you remember, all those years ago?
That was when up was down and down was up,
That day so far in the past,
So long ago I can barely remember,
Except the most important thing,
When you changed my life forever,
That day when up was down and down was up,
I wasn't sure what to make of it,
On September the first, two-thousand-and-five
I could feel inside of me this empty place,
I could feel it filling up,
I simply could not get enough,
That day far back, all those years ago,
September the first,  two-thousand-and-five,
That day when up was down and down was up,
The months went by, the weeks rolled on,
And though I did not know what to do,
There was one thing that I did know:
Alyssa M. Anonymous,
I loved you,
That day far back, all those years ago,
When up was down and down was up,
September the first, two-thousand-and-five
I wrote this poem a bit for someone very important to me, because she wrote a poem somewhat about her boyfriend - it inspired me to write one about him, too, but then I had to write one for her as well.

My first poem.
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Bug-Off's avatar
Actually, it kind of has a song lyrical rythm to it.